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Thakria - Through the eyes of a young Citizen
« on: May 21, 2008, 02:02:33 AM »
I did ask before posting this as I was very uncertain about doing so but..... my little essay for you to read and giggle over (as I am sure there are plenty of errors in it!)  ;) Apologies for the length of the tome but I got a bit carried away  ;D I wanted to write something that would help a new citizen without giving too much away.

                          Thakria – The City of Miracles

                       As seen through the eyes of a new citizen.

Mighty Thakria, a place of power and excellence. A city that expects much of its loyal citizens but endows them with great rewards and power.

Thakria can be, and often is, a confusing, bustling metropolis, filled with powerful figures who dominate politics and trade with the strides of giants. A new citizen can feel rather small and insignificant as they stand in Thakria’s main square and watch the traders hawking their wares and the myriad citizens going about their daily, and frequently nightly, activities. However, no young Thakrian is alone for long as a member of the Institute, situated on Moonstone Crescent, will soon take them by their trembling hand and lead them through their first bewildered steps as a citizen of Avalon’s greatest city.

Learning a little of Thakria’s illustrious history becomes a necessary part of life. Do they not say that knowledge is power? And power, above all things, is the way of Thakria. Why else would the vengeful Goddess, Xanthe, bless the city with her patronage? Many times, throughout the ages, has Thakria sallied forth, from her position in the North West of the lands, with her armies dealing destruction to the great enemies of Mercinae and Springdale. Allied with the vicious population of Goblin Town, Thakria places herself in an unassailable position and forces her enemies to submit, usually with a great deal of cruel and unusual punishment that said enemies will not soon forget. The cheers of the victorious ring down through the years to remind those who would consider bringing battle to Thakria that such a course is folly of the highest order.

One cannot help but wonder what Trekker the Sorcerer would think, standing now before the Sorcerers Guild, which he founded. Would he be as proud of Thakria today as he was when he was the first mortal to enter its rebuilt streets and gaze upon its magnificent buildings? Does Genesis, God of Time, smile quietly when surveying this site of might and majesty, remembering the time when it was simply a fishing village upon the edge of Moonstone Lake and recall the shipwreck of Count Agemmenion here, the start of Thakria’s true rise to dominance? Do Orthwein, Nostradamus and Lazarus look down from their lofty positions upon Olympus and fondly recall their days as humble citizens, Snowlock, Blodwyn and Shaitan, some of the most notorious, powerful and revered persons to have ever walked Thakrian avenues.
Ah, the avenues. Who is not humbled a little when they walk Kings Avenue and see the honour paid to the heroes of the Divine War, Mavramon, Alsace, Morichella and Yellian-Ze?

Perhaps it is simpler for one new to the city to walk its streets and see the wonders for themselves. Would you care to take my arm and walk with me now? Very well then, let us revel in the glories of the City of Miracles.

We stand before the impressive Gate to Thakria, with its triumphant depiction of victory over Mercinae, a recurring theme throughout history. Passing within we see the flag topped watchtowers and are likely to be greeted by Crown-Prince Hecritor, an imposing and intimidating presence heralding those we may yet find within the city. Moving on, passing barrows of yet further great men, we come to the northern end of The Avenue of Kings, feeling a little insignificant under the weight of such might and majesty. Treading the black-paved streets we may find our feet drawn to the welcoming bustle of The Red Rose Tavern. A drop of spirits to bolster ours perchance? No doubt, Mercy will smile as we step up to the bar.

But come, there is yet more to see and time is ever fleeing. Back on the Avenue we pause to gaze upon the tomb of Emperor Pitus, thronged with worshipers as is common. Did he truly unite the entirety of Avalon? Perhaps that is a tale for discovery in the future as we must hurry on. Upon reaching the northern end of the avenue we are greeted with the rushing populace and a shop that will soon become familiar to young Thakrians, Dalgar’s, The Pawnbroker. But do not be distracted by the constant stream of eager questers selling their loot, only follow me to the south east and behold Salt Street.


It is easy to become lost in the further reaches of the city but gems, literal and figurative, may be found in such places. A locked gate to the south west prevents your progress and you will find many such throughout the city. Their purpose? It is not for me to say and for you to discover on your journey. To the east is a small forge and it will serve you well to note where you may purchase GOODS for who can tell when a well made weapon or piece of armour will safeguard you from sudden attack. But fear not. For this while, you are safe to wander.

To the southeast, following the scent of roses, we come to a junction and are faced with the decision as to whether we should venture into the darker alleys or follow Salt Street to the northwest. Come, this is Thakria after all and danger is of no concern to us. To the south east we are faced with another junction and you may note objects lying around as you walk these streets. Of those, I will say no more but do investigate for yourself. Despite the dingy alleyways and general air of menace you will find your wandering course rewarded should you head west but for now, we will take the eastern way. Perhaps it is best we do not attempt the footbridge for there are greater wonders to be discovered to the northeast.


The tower rises high above and dwarfs those who dare to stand at its base but we will not tarry, only returning to the junction and hurrying on relieved feet towards the northern regions of Salt Street. An impressive home lies to the west but good manners prevent us trespassing on a mere whim, at least while others watch us. Who knows what might be found within when shadows hide our actions?  Onwards yet, to the bridge on Emerald Avenue. Why Emerald? My friend, you have but to look upon the waters flowing below or to the stones beneath your feet. The houses above are more substantial leading one to wonder if the Barons of the city have their residences in these parts. For young Thakrians the sight of palatial mansions and gleaming palaces can only stir envy and spur their desire to attain such wealth for themselves.

The Barons? Ah, forgive me. In my ardent desire to show you the wonders of transcendent Thakria I have neglected to tell you enough of its people. As with all great cities that have risen to dominance, Thakria has a strong government and a Princess, Narissa, who is both famous and infamous. As is usual in such cases, the Barons were appointed to varying ministries but I get ahead of myself. Come; let us find a quiet place where I may explain the niceties of Thakria’s political structure.

Crossing the bridge to the east we stumble across the square of the First Emperor. Perhaps the inn to the northwest will offer us a quiet nook to rest our weary feet but I think we should continue along the Road of the Ancients to the east. It is tempting to linger by the bakers, close to the East gate, with its delicious aromas but we require a more peaceful location. Let us head northeast and rest on the banks of the River Leithe. Surveying the east wall gives some idea of how well the city is prepared for attack should any be so foolish as to attempt such folly.

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« Last Edit: May 21, 2008, 04:27:32 AM by Danalia »
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« Reply #1 on: May 21, 2008, 02:03:48 AM »
To the structure of government then. The Prince, or currently Princess, rises to their exalted position with the support of the city Barons. The Barons in their turn are elected by the citizens. Yes, even you may, one day, influence the politics of your city. The Prince/ss leads the city, guides it with skill and intelligence, appointing Barons, the High Constable, the Chancellor and the Ministers.

Currently, and of course such things are subject to the tides of popular opinion and the fall from grace of various government members, Princess Narissa leads the city. A point of interest is that our exalted leader is also the City Librarian. One could almost believe that she has some way to stretch time to enable her to fulfil all her varied duties! Her government consists of Cardinal Kal Zakath, Sir Lancelot, Fireblade, minister for Trade, Belgadeth, High Constable, Warlock Zamphere, Chancellor of the Treasury, Achelous, Minister of State, Hebephrenia Parallax, Minister for Foreign Affairs, Ritualist Raistlin, Warlock of Thakria, Minister for Public Relations and Count Trakea, Kohen HaGadol, Minister for Justice.

Please, feel free to take a clearing breath and meditate upon these things before we tackle the Barons and their roles. I am well aware that there is much information to be digested for I am still learning every day. Perhaps we should stroll on whilst you cogitate. There is a worthy little sidetrack to the southeast but we will turn away from the forest edge to the east and head west to the City Library. Much can be discovered by requesting books from the librarian on duty. Such pleasure I will leave you to discover for yourself but I recommend The Thakrian Biographies in particular. Come; let us take in the magnificence of the upper gallery whilst I tell you of the roles our Barons fulfil.

Narissa of the Thieves (did I not tell you of her time stretching powers?) is Baron of Miracles and has overall control, guiding the city with intelligence and guile. Working with her are many others, Count Trakea, Baron of Vision. Under the diligence of this mighty Cavalier the ideals and morale of the city is cared for. Let us not forget Ninja Narl Aruki Nuki-Uchi of the Thieves, our Baron of Might. To him we look for leadership in combat training and the alert monitoring of our territories. Alongside these are Seered Devi of the Seers, Baron of Growth, responsible for our youth and the spread of Thakrian beliefs and finally, Sir Lancelot of the Loremasters, Baron of Resource. As the name implies Sir Lancelot oversees the finances and resources of our great city.

However, it is time we were moving on. I see the glint in your eye as you look upon the images of those who were ordained, rising above the mortals below. I know the thought in you mind, the secret you think secure in your heart. How many will fall before you as you strive to join those glorious few? Best you see more before you rush ahead of your fragile abilities. This way…
Returning to the Square of the First Emperor we head north and take in the grandeur of Guardians Parade, passing the Herb shop and northwards yet further. The presence of the bank perhaps speaks of the better nature of the area as we pass Prince’s drive to the west and head toward the Keep. Diverting east we come upon another shop in Silk Street and it is not very difficult to guess at its produce when one considers the street name. However, the overpowering smell of hops to the south forces us to move on.  We approach and pass through the Guardhouse gate. We will rest awhile in the courtyard before the Keep to consider the Ministerial duties of the Thakrian government.

Our Minister of State, Achelous is responsible for building, shaping and trading that goes on in the city. No doubt some of the fine houses and shops are under his careful ministry and we will see them as we pass through the streets. The position of Minister for Foreign Affairs speaks for itself and Parallax surely attained the position due to skill in diplomacy and negotiating. It must take one of strong will and determination to take on the Ministry of Justice and who better than a devoted Cavalier, Count Trakea to police our city and see that the laws are upheld. It seems reasonable to assume that the strength of the Loremasters guild should produce Sir Lancelot, highly capable of dealing with gold and commodity collection in his role as Minister for Trade. And perhaps only Thakria would have placed Ritualist Raistlin in position as Minister for Public Relations, a possible baptism of fire and a worthy introduction to this city of power.

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« Reply #2 on: May 21, 2008, 02:04:46 AM »
As we return to the bridge and begin our walk along Emerald Avenue to the north allow me a moment to explain how it is possible to rise from lowly commoner. There are titles to be gained as you grow in knowledge and experience, a part of those rewards that were spoken of as a citizen. No Thakrian will wish to remain a commoner long and those with drive and commitment may quickly move through such titles as Messenger or Freeman/woman, past Squire/Maiden and Gentleman/Woman to the upper titles of Nobleman/woman, Marquis/Marchioness and onwards to the dizzy heights of Count/Countess and Duke/Duchess. From the point of view of those below it must be a grand thing indeed to have attained such titles of Nobility.

Ah, here we are. Passing the stables we come in sight of the Thakrian Quays to the north and I can think of no more relaxing way to pass what idle time you may find than gazing across Moonstone Lake and perusing the shops alongside the promenade. Gyges is always worth a little time if one wishes to track the latest in fashion for the discerning Thakrian and Laphacles Tea Room awaits the end of your shopping trip. Not for us though. It is perhaps best we do not tread the path to the forbidding tower ahead. We will head onto Moonstone Crescent and discover the University and Institute and the road leading to the residence of Emperor Periam and the Empress, Helenna. Do not be afraid to stand in their presence for they are often willing to aid you with a City Quest which may lead to riches and experiences you might not have looked for.

To the south is an entrance to Central Park. I will leave you to discover its pretty pathways and numerous features for yourself for I wish to show you Victory Road. I would warn you not to wander the path of stone creatures but you are Thakrian and my advice will go unheeded… we hope. Upon Victory Road, the name yet more evidence of the nature of Thakria, you may turn southeast to enter the park but we will continue south, past the armourers and enter the northern docklands. Thakria, laying as she does on the ocean edge, has a busy port and the tang of salt in the air, the name of the inn, and the general level of babble about you attests to this. To the west of the central docklands lies an interesting diversion which will surely bring you closer to the ocean, mayhap closer than you wish. I will leave you in the hands of Proteus should you wish to explore that region. From the southern docklands it is worth heading northwest to take in the awe-inspiring sight of the Eye of Orision. Under the captaincy of Asiman, this is indeed a fearsome warship.

Southeast we begin to head back, along Docklands Way, to the more trade centred areas of the city. Yet another armourer speaks of Thakria’s need, nay, desire for strength in arms. A narrow alley heads east, heavy with closed doors, which leads you west of the main Thakrian square. We will return here shortly but for now we return to Docklands Way. Following this obsidian-paved road south and east we eventually arrive at the Street of the Glorious Dawn. To the west lies the Road of Pericles, God of the Sky and the Parrian embassy can be found along its route but I have no wish to spoil the mysteries of that road for you. I well remember questing for items to bring back to a lady close by. May you quickly achieve the same aim. Also to the west lies the Old Quarter and the location of another tavern. It is however late in the day and you are new to the city, unprepared for the, shall we say, less seemly side of life that most Thakrians revel in. No, we shall head to Temple Parade for I long to return home. I have been gone too long from my guild. No, do not ask me yet. I will reveal what I may in due course.

Eastwards we come full circle and pass Dalgar’s once more to reach the junction of Temple Parade and Kings Avenue. It is only fitting that you take the black marble path to the northwest, pass under the Vengeance Gate and visit the temple of Xanthe, Goddess of Vengeance. Our patron deserves our obedience and offerings for she aids our dominance and power. The Diabolus also has a temple here, to the south.  East once more Temple Parade presents us with the Gateway to Ellerina, Temple of Elatar, God of the Stars. Perhaps I neglected to mention that it is traditional, upon the uncommon event of a wedding, should the ceremony not be held in the Cathedral of Mercinae, it is held in one of the many temples in Thakria.

Entering the East end of Emperor’s Walk you begin to sense the rise in noise levels as we pass guildhouses and head for Thakria’s central square.
Upon arrival in the centre of the square you are besieged on all sides by traders, each fighting to outdo the other in the cut-throat world of business. It seems, to your bewildered eyes, that you can indeed buy anything in Thakria. Perhaps it is true but it is not for me to tell our secrets until your loyalty is proven to this superb city. Forgive me if I am hurrying now but my home calls to me. I may not let you pass within but we will watch the citizens at the stall close by and I will tell you what I can of my guild.

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« Reply #3 on: May 21, 2008, 02:09:04 AM »
Much is written and available for you to gain knowledge from concerning the guilds but I can only speak for mine, The Loremasters. As you can see, the guild lies at the heart of Thakria and this speaks of its power and influence. It is said that, upon a time, under the guidance of Yairi, the Loremasters were possibly the richest guild in Avalon and their military might was unsurpassed by any guild in Thakria. It was due to their discovery of the combat potential of their Skills that they became so powerful. In fact, they were the first to discover this potential source of dominance. Zenichiro, current Guildmaster and Evil Aerian were both said to be masters of these skills.

Loremasters tend to be creative people with an urge to make items that will protect the Thakrian people. This is not to say that they are all peaceable for they are more than capable of using their skills to harry enemies and aid battle. Perhaps foremost in this area are those who choose to hone their skill at forging, making armour and weapons of unparalleled excellence. The elixirs of the alchemists are proven advantageous to Thakrians in both war and in peacetime missions about the sometimes dangerous realm of Avalon.

Founded under the Goddess of wisdom in the seventh century, it was first lead by Raghallach the Golden and his words stated that the Loremasters were without alignment, seekers of independence and looking to profit from all who cross their paths. His aide, Davros Bloodaxe took over the reins and led the Loremasters to even greater renown.

Like all professions, the Loremasters have a specialist skill-set. The basics are Alchemy which entails placing spells on items and learning the power of Lorerobes and the Lorestaff. The making of Elixirs can include healing potions and others that are useful to the purchaser. The skill of Runes may include embedding rune staves and transmuting silver which is used in the making of powerful runes. Forging I have already mentioned and no doubt you will come across the need for such weapons as forged by the Loremasters if you wish to continue your rise to power and dominance.

Within the same sphere you will encounter The Alchemists, Craftmasters and Artisans. Again, there is a wealth of information for you to discover about these professions and you should discover all you can before embarking on your course.

I see how eager you are to depart and begin your own journey through Thakria so I will keep you from it no longer. I trust you have found this walk informative and I look forward to battling with you as we progress through the ranks of the unmatched city of Thakria. Fare you well.

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Re: Thakria - Through the eyes of a young Citizen
« Reply #4 on: May 21, 2008, 02:26:02 AM »
Hey, well done! That was really good!! The Ministers have had a slight tweaking since the time of writing though...  :D
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« Reply #5 on: May 21, 2008, 04:22:25 AM »
I'll let it stand as an historical document of my first days... As opposed to fiddling with it every time government feels the need for a shuffle  ;D

Thanks for the kind words.
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« Reply #6 on: May 21, 2008, 06:56:39 AM »
Very, very nice! I'll definitely put a copy of that into the city library (although I may modify the minister/baron section a bit). Excellent research and observations, Danalia - I love it! I think I'm going to be dragging you around as my city secretary soon....muha!
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« Reply #7 on: May 21, 2008, 07:25:16 AM »
*passes out in a corner with sheer relief*

Thank you and if that secretarial position needs filling at any point .....or scribe in the library  ;)
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