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Offline Endyamon

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Weird Science
« on: January 20, 2008, 08:07:14 PM »
Here's a log Narissa and I made last night.  It's a long one, so make some coffee, sit back and relax!

Oh yeah, it's also a little gruesome, so if you're the type is who easily offended, you may wish to skip over this.

You've been warned.

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THE CAST:

===ENDYAMON====
As a nearby shadow recedes, your attention is drawn to a mysterious presence. Pale green eyes regard you, appraising your social status, worth and vulnerability in a single glance. With a stature well above most company, he remains aloof and exudes a quiet confidence that is known only to those who hold great secrets.

Wavy, raven locks fall untamed above his brow as the remainder is pulled down the centre of his back like a princely mane. A clean-shaven face, too ashen to have seen much daylight betrays many nights awake, perhaps spent walking the streets of Thakria. Undoubtedly, he is one of her more eccentrically dressed citizens.

He could be perceived to be a gentleman for his garments are tailored to the present fashion and show only minimal wear. His great-cloak, however, is truly extraordinary. Boasting an upturned collar that clings to his frame as an eager embrace, this display of excess ends in a sweeping fashion to brush his immaculately tended leather boots. A sumptous black, the cloak is trimmed in deep purple
fabrics, animal print, and adorned with polished ivory buttons.

=====NARISSA=====
Narissa stands before you, slim and slight, reaching barely the shoulder of an average height knight. Bronzed skin makes a warm contrast to the black garments stretched over her frame: skin-tight, they cling to her curves, allowing for mobility during combat, and leverage during negotiations. Strapped to her back, hanging from her waist and lashed around her thighs are various belts and pouches,
slightly redolent of toxic odors, symbols of her lucrative and deadly trade.

Dark auburn hair, streaked with jet, tumbles down her back, confined only at the temples by a small golden circlet. Slightly concealing the fine network of scars across her brow, the diadem glitters russet against her hair, subtly shining as her one concession to rank. Flickering amber eyes smoulder from deep-set hollows above slender cheekbones. Large and elliptic, they almost appear feline, their glint framed by thick, dark eyelashes. A dusky complexion serves to highlight and
compliment their glow.

A slender neck, mottled with a curious collection of bruises, arches down to modestly toned arms; though not appearing overtly powerful, her body still shows the evidence of rigourous training and practice. Her hands, despite being roughly calloused, are still graceful and lithe, her fluid fingers perfectly suited for the more intricate tasks of the land.

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THE PLACE:

Below a storm drain.
You are able to see by the light of the lantern. The smell of human waste mixes with the acrid stench of rat droppings. Careful brickwork is fair dripping in slime that has built up over the years. Fungi of all sorts dwells in the dark niches within the walls and omnipresent throughout are the rats, the rats that have lived here since they were build. They scurry around the pipes and brickwork as you wade briskly through the sludge of faeces and festering bilgewater that leads off into the darkness.

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THE PLAN:

Narissa tilts her head, nodding thoughtfully as her gaze turns distant, her stare skittering absently across the slime-slicked stones and rutted cavities of the sewer.

a shadowy figure eyes you carefully, noting your concern. He clears his throat and softly says, "What is it, Narissa?".

Narissa raises her eyebrows lightly, as if faintly surprised. "Concern?" she vaguely says, frowning. "Not concerned..." Trailing off, she returns watching the puddling murk running in rivulets along the floor of the sewers.

a shadowy figure sidles up beside you and tilts his head in an effort to see from your vantage point. "Hmm. What is it we're watching then?" he asks perplexedly.

Narissa slowly sinks to the ground, tracing a finger across the scummy surface, her hand coming away slick with refuse. "Offal," she murmurs. "Waste. Humanity..."

Narissa wipes her hand off on her boot, leaving a dark streak, dimly shiny beneath her lantern's guttering light.

a shadowy figure crouches beside you, leaning slightly forward, staring into the refuse as a reader of tea leaves. "Indeed, Narissa." he replies. He turns his glance toward you and adds, "it's been my opinion from the start. Though there is the rare exception.".

Narissa tilts her head sideways towards you, her gaze focusing into hazy clarity. Frowning, she dreamily asks, "What makes it different? At what point do we become more than flesh..."

Narissa rises, straightening, tucking a lock of hair behind her ear, her hand leaving a grimy smudge across her cheekbone.

Narissa's lips curve into an odd, tentative smile. "An experiment," she breaths, eyes widening.

a shadowy figure frowns slightly and returns his gaze to the sewage. He sighs deeply and shakes his head. "I don't believe flesh necessarily equates itself to..." he gestures toward the slimy residue on the ground, "... This.". He stands up clears his throat, a hint of nausea in his tone, "You wouldn't know it by how most people are though.".

Narissa squints her eyes, peering up through the sewer grate, starlight from above filtering through in misty shafts to lightly haze her form. Glints mark her eyes, while a silvery trail flashes at her hip, light falling across her blade to softly shimmer. Cocking her head, she pauses a moment, unconsciously posed.

a shadowy figure wipes his thumb along the edge of his cloak and quickly licks it. He leans forward and wipes the smudge from your cheekbone, smiling softly.

"You said you wished to experiment?", says Endyamon in the thief-tongue.

Narissa continues to peer up, nodding vaguely, as if in a trance, her body barely registering your touch. "We'll need a subject," she whispers. "Such....humanity, all about, what makes life, death, stagnancy, waste -" Exhaling sharply, she adds, "What makes the magic..."

a shadowy figure raises his eyebrow thoughtfully and tilts his head in an attempt to understand your words. "The magic...?" he asks.

Narissa reaches her arms up, levering herself against the slick walls, as her fingers pull herself up, finally grasping the underside of the grate. Deftly flipping herself upside down, she hangs by her knees from the sewer entrance, her nodding head a pale oval obscured by the dark streaks of her hanging hair.

"The magic - what makes mortals mortals, and mighty mortals mighty...", says Narissa in the thief-tongue.

Narissa slides her eyes down towards the shadowed puddles. "What makes us more than what we create..." Pausing, she turns her head, the angle allowing her eyes to peer upwards through the grate to rest on the darkened stab one of Thakria's spires makes into the inky sky. "Or less than..."

Narissa glances back down into the tunnel, her eyes gleaming oddly. "A king!" she says in a breathless hiss.

a shadowy figure nods in comprehension. "What better place to start? They don't get much mightier than kings.".

Narissa curls her body, acrobatically twisting up and out of the tunnel, tumbling into a lithe crouch on the pavement of the cobbled square above.

North of Thakria Square.

"So where to find a king...", says Endyamon in the thief-tongue.

Narissa tilts her head in thought for a moment, before slowly shaking it in negation. Turning towards you with shining eyes, she whispers, "What's better than a king, Endyamon?"

Someone strokes his chin and looks around himself in deep thought. He inhales sharply and you espy his eyelids fluttering beneath his darkened countenance.

Someone's eyes snap open with excitement. "A god!" he exclaims.

Narissa watches you with anticipation, her eyes flickering as she eagerly nods.

Narissa whistles for her mount, quickly swinging up onto to steed, her hands gripping the reins in tense excitement.

Someone vaults himself onto the steed and wraps his arms tightly around you.

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Re: Weird Science
« Reply #1 on: January 20, 2008, 08:12:01 PM »
(CONTINUED)

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THE SCIENCE:

Rock pinnacle.
The sky about you is alive with the day-time. Sitting on the snow-crowned tip of the rocky spire, you survey a cloudscape of a truly wondrous splendour and beauty. Rock-snow mountaintops rise up, adrift on a smooth white cloud-sea, sparkling in blazing sunlight. Against the whiteness below, the dome of the sky is a deep blue hemisphere atop the horizon, the sun a bright disc shining down through stray
streamers of mist. The air is bitingly cold, but to you, a mortal privileged to visit what is surely the realm of the Gods, it seems merely invigorating. To your left, casting dancing watery reflections against the surrounding rocks, is a deep pool of mountain water, while at the foot of the pinnacle is the mountain village of Archangel, sacred village of Genesis, the god of time. Flurries of thick snow issue from the clouded heavens above. There is a distinct feeling of privacy
here.

Narissa releases a pent breath as the steed crests the rise and pauses, surveying the rock pinnacle before her.

Someone releases his grip from your waist and falls backwards off of the golden eagle, landing firmly on his feet. He stretches and looks around curiously.

Narissa cautiously slides down from the eagle, one arm extending to grasp your shoulder in a vise-like grip. Her gaze darts about the peak, assessing every craggy face of the cliff.

Someone crouches and traces a finger in the dirt as he thoughtfully takes in the scenery. "Not even a week has passed since Kodiak ascended and you'd never know it. This place is immaculate, as if no one has ever stepped foot here." he muses.

Narissa releases your arm, her hand sliding down to stroke the ancient rocks. Her breath draws in quickly in a sudden gasp, and, slowly, she approaches the divine pool, shimmering reflections from the surface dancing across her face. "Not quite," she whispers, an odd, strangled note in her voice.

Someone raises an eyebrow and walks over to where you are standing. "What do you see, Narissa?" he asks, as he peers into the divine pool.

Narissa carefully leans closer towards the water, her eyes growing hazy and unfocused as they watch the hypnotic skitter of light across the surface of the pool. An eerie glow colors her face, swirling in twisted streamers across her features - a shimmer from the depths of the water, one of iridescent, vibrant light.

Narissa extends a hand, tentatively skimming the surface of the water. "Essence," she breathes, watching the knotted clot of luminescence slowly undulating in the deepest hollows of the pool.

Someone blinks and furrows his brow, staring more intently at the water, the flickering patterns dazzling him as his lips curl upward into a curious smile. "Essence..." he repeats as he reaches to touch his reflection.

Narissa shivers as she touches the water, nodding in a daze. Leaning closer to the pool itself, her eyes widen. "Can you see him..." she whispers, staring transfixed at the very bottom of the small lake.

Someone shakes his head, pulling himself away from the pool's spell. He turns toward you and frowns. "Kodiak is no more, Narissa... What do you see...?" He turns to stare back into the depths of the water and grits his teeth in concentration.

Someone's jaw drops in astonishment, his breathing becoming rapid as puffs of steam punctuate the air before his wide-eyed face. "My... God..." he stammers.

Narissa continues to reach downwards, plunging her arm into the waters. Shuddering at the icy touch of the pool, she reaches, a perfectly preserved body resolving from the maelstrom of essence. Rigid features form in the water, so still and quiet, peacefully set into a noble countenance - the man might be merely sleeping.

Narissa lets out a pained gasp, her hand clutching a thick lorerobe which suddenly swirls outwards from the essence, ravelling into existence within her grasping fist. One finger snags on a sharpened shard of gem, delicately sewn into the garment, and the gash spills a bright cloud of crimson into the waters. She stares numbly at the blooming ribbons of blood, watching silently as the scarlet is quickly sucked into the swirling essence.

Someone gasps and chokes on the frigid air. "By the gods..." he mutters under his breath as he plunges an arm into the icy depths of the pool to aid you. After a few attempts he wraps his fingers around a bejewelled hand and pulls back, attempting to find leverage on a nearby rock.

Narissa limply attempts to assist you, though her face is growing wan and her movements sluggish. The cut, instead of slowing in bleeding, appears to be widening, spilling more of her blood into the warped and twisting clot of essence.

Narissa shivers violently, her body convulsing unconsciously. "The power....is draining..." she whispers, one hand still tangled in the corpse's clothing.

Someone shudders from the bitter cold and between chattering teeth and heavy breath, he manages to stutter, "This is madness...". He releases his grip on the frozen corpse and grabs for you, pulling you away from the water and breaking your fall as you collapse onto him.

Narissa gasps loudly, color rushing back to her cheeks. "Get the body," she manages to hiss through clenched teeth, as she holds her hand tightly against her chest.

Someone grabs your hand and examines the deep wound. Acting quickly, he takes his long knife and cuts a strip of material from his great cloak and tosses it to you.

Narissa tightly wraps the cloth around her hand, her eyes trained on your movements.

Someone launches himself toward the body which slowly begins to sink back into the swirling essence and with cat-like agility, wraps his fingers once more around the stiffened hand of the corpse, gripping firmly by the wrist.

Someone clenches his teeth in preparation for the task ahead of him. He digs his feet into the ground and shifts his weight as if falling backward, allowing gravity to handle the lion's share of the work. With a loud, primitive grunt, he begins to step back slowly, his hands gripping the frozen body, inching his way to land.

Narissa staggers to her feet, lurching forwards to help you. Gripping the other arm of the body, she pulls with a surprising amount of force, her arms locked beneath the armpit of the corpse.

Someone nods quickly and exhales sharply in gratitude for the assistance. Shuffling backwards the corpse slowly emerges from the pool, his hands now free from the frozen water. Endyamon adjusts his grip and begins to hold the corpse from the opposite armpit as his cohort.

Narissa helps you begin to lever the body towards the ground. As she steps backwards, she quickly glances at the face, and her hands shake suddenly, nearly dropping the body. "Gods, Endyamon," she murmurs in shock. "He looks....ALIVE...."

Someone emits one final grunt and using his remaining energy, takes large strides backward, the frozen body carried by his momentum. Now upon dry land, Endyamon releases his grip on the corpse and collapses onto the ground behind him.

Narissa stumbles forwards, her grip on the body tugging her downwards. Tumbling across the rocky floor, she lands near you, her eyes wide with disbelief. Turning to look towards you, she shakes her head in incomprehension. "What..." she whispers faintly.

Someone pants heavily, the chill wind freezing the sweat on his brow. He nods silently to you. Gulping heavily between breaths, he finally manages to mutter, "Yes...".

Narissa forces herself to swallow, her mouth dry and her eyes slightly frenzied. "Is he...? Have we...?"

Someone shudders and nods earnestly. "Not alive..." he gasps, and continues, "... Just a shell. But it's ours now..." he smiles weakly.

Narissa slowly nods, a strange smile creeping across her face. "This is true," she murmurs, lightly prodding the body with a slippered toe. "I wonder....If we peel away the skin...?"

Someone's breathing begins to catch up with him and he clears his throat. "... Is there anybody in there?" he continues.

Narissa laughs sharply, breaking off the giggle with a hiccuping cough, eyes darting about nervously as the sound echoes off the surrounding peaks with the harsh, deafening crack of a bowstring's shot.

Someone removes a skin of wine and a handful of wood from a hessian sack. He offers the drink to you and begins to stack the kindling into a neat pile in the middle of a rocky clearing on the pinnacle.

Someone winks at you and says, "Drink up, Narissa. There's work to be done.".

Narissa takes the wine, her brow furrowing into a puzzled frown. Taking a deep gulp, she coughs, gasping at the sting. "Dwarven," she mutters, forcing a swallow. Pausing, her eyes shift to you. Suspiciously, she quietly asks, "What are you doing...?"

Someone lights the wood and stokes a modest fire that remains ablaze despite the chill winds. He regards you unblinkingly and shrugs. "Just trying to keep us warm is all!" He returns to stoking the fire as he chuckles to himself.

Someone smiles, satisfied with his handiwork as he holds his palms outward to the fire and rubs them together for warmth. Standing up, he stretches near the fire, the glow from the flames seemingly absorbed by his cloak as he closes his eyes and momentarily enjoys the heat.

Someone walks to the corpse and with one swift motion, lifts it up like a sack of potatoes and lumbers back to the fire before unceremoniously dumping the lifeless body onto the rocky floor.

Narissa edges closer to the fire, taking another swig of wine. Frowning, she peers at the corpse. "Burn it?" she mutters.

Someone motions for you to sit beside him, as he continues to warm himself. "You can't properly experiment on a frozen body, you know."

Narissa reluctantly nods, the enormity of the situation dawning on her. "He's a GOD," she giggles, sipping from the wineskin.

Someone prods the body. As he removes his hand, an indentation is left behind signifying that the body has begun to warm up and is no longer frigid.

Someone shakes his head and replies, "He..." gesturing to the body, "... Is a corpse.".

Narissa watches with a mixture of revulsion and fascination as the body slowly thaws, the firelight casting life-like color across the corpse: a rosy glow springs up on the cheeks, reflecting the burning embers, while an array of twinkling sparks from the robes and rings glitter in response to the bright flames.

Narissa tilts her head, regarding the body. "Not just a corpse, though," she slyly grins. "He did not....die....per se..."

Someone strokes his chin and says, "The God who once inhabited this body now resides in Olympus as you know and no longer needs this shell. It's as dead as it's going to get, no?".

Narissa snickers, nodding. "Fair point," she laughs. "Though....some of that Divine touch is surely to reside? What we have is the body at the exact moment of transition from mortal to God!"

Someone smiles and nods. "Which is perfect for what you had in mind. To see what resides in the flesh that makes the mighty what they are.".

Narissa watches the body with a disconcerting gleam dawning in her eyes. "What we have is a key to Divinity - the truest answer we'll ever find to what makes the magic!"

Narissa lets out a crow, taking another deep sip from the wine, as she inches even closer to the fire - and the motionless body.

Someone smiles and nods as he polishes the blade of his long knife with the tattered fabric of his great-cloak.

Narissa silently pulls her knife from the scabbard at her hip, tilting the weapon to regard the inverted image of the body as it is reflected in a warped scrawl across the polished blade.

Narissa leans forwards, dropping into a crouch, as she tentatively rests a hand on Kodiak's chest. "So warm..." she murmurs, "Yet so still..." Her hand traces upwards to skim against a fire-heated brow, before letting her fingers pause at the creases of the eyes.

Narissa lightly pulls the lids open, revealing a blank, deep stare, gaze fixed upwards at the night sky stretching above. The dying flames flicker in an eerie reflection across the orbs, as Narissa's mouth twists into a warped smile. "I think the body should be able to witness its own greatness," she laughs, her voice raising into a high-pitched, muffled giggle.

Someone watches you expectantly and beams broadly. Wide-eyed and mouth agape, he regards the tip of your blade as it begins its descent into the flesh of the freshly thawed corpse.

Narissa lets her other hand descend suddenly, the knife biting into the hollow of the throat. Gently, she eases it down the chest, the razor-edged blade slicing through both flesh and cloth. Reaching the sternum, she pauses, staring at the corpse with curiosity, withdrawing the knife, an unexpected thick layer of blood slick and bright against the silver.

Narissa frowns, murmuring in interest, "How odd..."

Someone smiles and kneels over the body, his eyes following your every move as he witnesses the handiwork of your first incision. He tilts his head and regards you with a puzzled look. "What is it? What's odd?" he asks.

Narissa returns the blade to the body, slicing downwards again, slashing through the torso. "How many week-dead corpses," she asks in a conversational tone, "Bleed?"

Narissa pulls the loose flesh away from the chest, exposing a ribcage, bones bright as snow against the darkened night. Absently turning one hand towards you, she displays a sticky, near-black palm, before returning to the explorations.

Someone furrows his brow and examines the deep incision and then looks back to your blade, stained with crimson. "Bleeding... Amazing. But, it is not beating." He pulls away the flesh from the chest and points out the stillness of Kodiak's heart.

Narissa begins to delicately cut at the ribs, her fingers leaving stark streaks of crimson on the bones. Chipping away at the sternum, she nods in agreement. "As I said, merely odd..." Trailing off, she highlights a section of fused bone, circling it with her knife point, the blade leaving a bloodied circumference.

Narissa leans closer, staring at the unusual formation. "That spur is not human," she says in a perplexed tone. "I've only ever seen bone shapes like that in animals."

Someone strokes his chin, a smear of blood unwittingly left across his cheek, as he examines the breast bone and pulls back a flap of loose skin with the point of his blade to allow you easier access to your task. He lifts his head and turns toward you with a perplexed look in his eye. "Animals?" he asks.

Narissa nods slowly, her attention riveted by the odd structure. "Cougars, lions, bears..."

Narissa raises her eyebrows, her jaw going a bit slack. "Ah." she quietly says, as comprehension dawns.

Someone nods, comprehension playing across his features. "The Onyx... It literally changed his bone structure. That's... that's unbelievable" he gasps.

Narissa bites her lip, a pensive look creeping into her eyes. "I wonder if all the gems touch the body like that," she murmurs beneath her breath, as the knife gently skims the flesh, scraping away a layer between muscle and skin.

Narissa slowly begins to peel the skin away from the corpse, long, ropy segments pulling away from the muscle in sheets.

Someone leans into the chest cavity and chisels away diligently on the breast bone, completing the task. Jabbing the knife into the snow-capped ground, he frees his hands to remove the bony structure.

Narissa deposits the skin in a pile next to the body, leaning back onto her heels to regard you. "It's as if it was always there, isn't it?" she quietly says. "It's a perfect part of the body..."

Someone nods to you as he removes the chest bone in its entirety, revealing a host of organs. He discards the bone behind him and peers into the assemblage of innards with childlike curiosity. He picks his knife back up and smiles to you.

Someone asks, "So where do you propose we find the magic, Narissa?".

Narissa lets out a giddy laugh, as she leans forward again, staring down into the yawning maw of the exposed cavity. Slick organs shine from the depths of the body, light from the banked fire licking across their surfaces with an oily gleam.

Someone plunges a hand into the abdominal cavity of the corpse and lifts the stomach up. He turns it in his hand and examines it from many angles before touching the point of his blade to it and pushing inward, puncturing the organ.

Narissa watches, enthralled, as you dissect the stomach, a slimy mess of deflated organ dripping across your hand in a gory wreath.

Someone winces as nausea creeps across his features. He leans back and gulps loudly before saying, "No magic here, but we've solved another mystery, I think...".

"The dangers of an all apple diet?", you say.

Someone adds, "Smoked Haddock was his last meal.".

Narissa allows herself a nervous snicker.

Someone wretches silently and mutters, "Gods, I hate fish... Dumb bears.".

Someone lowers his blade to the viscera attaching the stomach to the remainder of the abdomen and slices it free before chucking the stomach and its fishy contents with a grunt.

Narissa tenderly reaches into the chest, lightly plucking the delicate, gauzy lungs away from the body. Unpreturbed by the stench, she smirks over at you. "After the sewers, I'd think that would hardly phase you," she taunts, returning her gaze to the organs.

Someone smirks at you and adds, "I much prefer the smell of sewers to week-digested fish.".

Narissa spreads the lungs across her palms, leaning across the body to splay her hands before the fire to better examine the organs.

Someone sidles next to you and peers into the lungs as you hold them exposed to the fire, the mucus and fluids glistening as the light of the fire dances across them. "Boring." he says.

Narissa stares at the delicate network and spiderwebbing of the veins across the lungs, mesmerized for a moment by the intricate interworking, before dumping them onto the fire. "Nothing special there," she grunts in agreement.


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Re: Weird Science
« Reply #2 on: January 20, 2008, 08:12:58 PM »
(CONTINUED)

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THE LESSON:

Narissa blinks suddenly as the fire sparks, hissing an ominous green smoke momentarily. "Err..." she amends, staring in amazement.

Someone stares into the fire and raises and eyebrow. "What the heck was that all about?".

Narissa shrugs in confusion, watching the smouldering embers glow with a perfectly normal hue, no hint of the sudden flare visible.

Someone shrugs and returns his attention to the exposed chest cavity of the former loremaster.

Someone looks to you with anticipation and nudges his head toward the heart. "What do you think we should do with that, Narissa?" he asks. "If anything, it could be your answer.".

Narissa prods at the heart with a bloodied finger, nodding slowly. Her hand shakes slightly as she reaches her fingers around it, grasping the organ in her palm and carefully pulling it upwards.

Someone watches you remove the heart from the chest of the body, a tense look in his eyes. As he stares at your hands, the mundanity of the situation creeps across his features as he states blankly, "It's just a dead heart...".

Narissa glances downwards at the empty void left in the chest, her interest caught by a small, spiraling tendril of steam snaking upwards. Absently grabbing a handful of your tunic, blood smearing across the shirt, she tugs you closer. "Look..." she murmurs...

Narissa peers closer, eyes widening as she spies a small, glistening stream resting atop the bloodied meat of the carcass's internal cavity. "Is that...the pool - the essence?" she ponders, staring at the puddled liquid, now quickly evaporating in the heat from the fire.

Someone peers into the heartless chest of the carcass with a perverse curiosity. His eyes follow the spiraling tendril as it evaporates in the air. He nods to you and says, "That's right... It's the left over water from the pool that's causing the body to act... alive?" he adds, "Wouldn't that explain the lungs?".

Narissa nods slowly, staring downwards at the heart. "I suppose it must be," she mutters, frowning. Delicately, she inserts the tip of her blade into the organ, gently slicing through a ventricle.

Narissa pries the heart open, exposing a chamber to the frigid air. Lightly skimming her fingers across the veined surface of the organ, she shrugs. "No magic," she sighs. "Just....just a heart..."

Someone stands up quickly and muses, "Just one second...". He walks quickly to the edge of the pool and collects a handful of the water. From a distance you can hear him mutter, "Gods, is that cold".

Someone walks back to you with a handful of essence and before you are able to register what he is doing, he pours the water over the heart as it lies still in your hands.

Narissa blinks up at you, frowning at the sudden, chill splash of water across her hand. "That's freezi-" she begins to complain, before suddenly breaking off, her mouth falling open in stunned silence. Wordlessly she watches as the lifeless heart in her hand, mangled and bloody, begins to slowly pulsate, crushed cavities expanding and contracting in a sickening, rolling motion.

Narissa tenses her arm unconsciously, a shudder rippling her frame as the reanimated organ beats, a soft, quiet thumping noise accompanying the movement.

Someone kneels beside you and peers at the beating heart in your cupped palms. His mouth open in amazement, he leans in for a closer look and examines the beating organ with excitement.

Narissa lightly rests her fingers on the surface of the heart, a thrill coursing her body as she feels each rise and fall of unnatural life.

Someone turns to you and stammers, "Incredible! It's the water from the pool that is causing it... Is this the magic?" he asks with a puzzled look in his eye.

Narissa slows her breathing as the pace of the beating begins to slacken, each pump tapering off into a longer and longer pause, until the organ finally lies silent once more. "The Divine?" she murmurs in thought, glancing over her shoulder at the pool, shrouded in shadows, yet still glimmering from within its depths.

Someone nods in agreement at your words. "The pool allowed Kodiak to become a god, but what of everything else that led him to this pinnacle?".

Narissa gently lays the heart down, peering down at the body, meeting the sightless gaze with a penetrating stare. "Where is your magic, Kodiak?" she whispers, gently stroking the torn and abused flesh. "You're just like the rest of us inside..."

Narissa nudges the corpse with a scowl, straightening and giving the body a light shove. Petulant, she watches with satisfaction as the body tilts, sickeningly lolling sideways, entrails spilling out of the torso in a moilee of tangled organs.

Narissa smirks at you, a wicked grin crossing her face. "Augery, anyone?" she giggles, a slight, spitefully hysterical note in her laugh.

Someone chuckles heartily and then sighs deeply kneeling beside the mangled corpse. He offers his bloodied hand to you and stares into your eyes.

Someone looks down at the carcass then returns his gaze to you and says, "I don't think you're going to find your magic Narissa. I think Kodiak is just like the rest of us... His decisions and actions caused him to end up here, that's all.".

Narissa smiles slowly, regret curving her mouth. "That makes a sad story for the rest of us," she murmurs, her eyes resting on the spilled organs.

Narissa sighs heavily. "After all of it...all we are is flesh and blood," she whispers. "And the ghosts of our dreams..."
 
Someone shrugs solemnly and continues, "Perhaps it is a bit sad... But for those of us who are strong, I see no reason why we cannot be mighty on our own.".

Narissa tilts her head, musing over your words. "I suppose...sometimes ghosts can live," she mutters enigmatically, staring at you with an unreadable expression.

Narissa clenches her hand suddenly, her fingers tightening about yours. "I'm not going to give up my ghosts," she whispers fiercely. "Kodiak once told me of his own dreams and how they were shattered..."

Narissa smiles sadly, looking down at the body. "But the shards found their way back, didn't they?" she quietly addresses the corpse, her mouth twitching with a mix of emotion.

Someone smiles and answers, "See? Even Kodiak's suffered and look at where he is now." He looks down at the violated remains and clears his throat. "Erm... He's in Olympus. I didn't mean this... Mess.".

Narissa glances sidelong at you, smothering a giggle. "Indeed," she replies simply.

Someone nods slowly and stands up, wiping the blood from his hands onto his trousers. He helps you to your feet and stares out across the pool. He inhales deeply and says, "So... What do we do with the body?".

Narissa purses her lips in thought. "We should return him, perhaps," she offers, her gaze darting towards the pool.

Someone chuckles and squeezes your hand. "Aye. Let's get him back home.".

Someone picks up the feet of the corpse and motions you over to grab him by the hands.

Narissa gingerly scoops the spilled entrails back into the body, the organs lying in a rippled, messy heap. Sighing, she impatiently pushes back a fall of hair from her face, leaving a bloody streak across her temple. Grasping the hands, she helps lift the body from its disgraced disinternment.

Someone lifts the body along with you and shuffles carefully to the edge of the pool, making sure not to spill any of the organs. The chill wind picks up again, freezing the sweat on his brow as the pair venture further away from the fire.

Narissa staggers beneath the dead weight of the corpse, approaching the edge of the pool.

Someone takes each step with a grunt, looks toward you and quips, "I'm just thankful he didn't ascend from bearform...".

Narissa shakes with silent laughter, nearly losing her grip on the body. Huffing with exertion, she rejoins, "I guess....it's true....about the loremasters....and those special....fattening brews they make....for their own private parties..." Panting, she finishes, "'Tis why they wear....the robes....".

Narissa winks slyly. "More flattering for the heftier frame," she smirks.

Someone chuckles in between his labored breathing and nods in agreement. At the edge of the pool, he releases his grip on the loremaster's feet which causes the carcass to hit the ground with a sickening thud, the sound of organs and blood sloshing inside the lifeless body cutting through the wind.

Narissa shuffles around, letting her end of the body rest against the rocky ledge surrounding the waters. Gently setting it down, she backs away, resting for a moment, as she studies her handiwork - the gaping hole of the chest, strafing chunks of bone and gristle ripped away in a ghastly display, while the denuded muscle gleams in with an oily glow from the shimmering waters.

Narissa frowns at the lolling head and sightless eyes, her stare softening. "Perhaps this was not a good idea," she whispers, a hint of an apology creeping into her voice.

Someone places his hands on his hips and attempts to catch his breath, steam rolling from his nostrils with each heavy exhalation. He rolls his eyes and regards you affectionately. "You always say things like that AFTER we're done, you realize...".

Narissa blushes faintly, stepping towards the body again. "At least THIS time it was already dead," she points out, bending down to begin levering the corpse into the waters.

Someone adds, "Exactly. Besides, this isn't Kodiak... Kodiak is in Olympus now. And we learned something as well.".

Narissa snorts indignantly. "All we learned is that there is.....nothing!" she mutters, gripping the corpse beneath the arms.

Someone positions himself near the body opposite you to prepare to heft the remains back into the divine pool. He nods and says, "That's science for you..." chuckling to himself, "... As weird as that was." He continues, "You ready?".

Narissa nods tersely, muscles straining as she begins to lift the body.

Someone lifts the body and mutters under his breath, "You're going to make one hell of a god, old man.".

Narissa lets a fondness sink into her expression, as she pushes the body over the rocky lip of the pool. "Farewell," she whispers, watching the corpse sink beneath the waters.

Someone stands near you and looks into the depths of the pool, his eyes following the descent of the loremaster's remains. "Aye. Farewell...".

Narissa stares, watching, as the body drifts downwards towards the swirling tangle of essence, her features changing to wonderment, as she grabs your arm. "Look!-" she utters in a strangled voice.

Narissa watches in amazement as the corpse begins to slowly change where it is embraced by the essence, rent flesh knitting together and mangled limbs smoothing into peaceful lines. Like wax melting in reverse, the body slowly reassembles into the form it once was, whole and unsullied.

Someone looks on in wonder and laughs out loud, his voice echoing over the pinnacle. He turns to you and smiles, his white teeth contrasting sharply with this blood-stained face. "I think we should probably keep this to ourselves, what say you?".

Narissa smiles faintly up at you, bobbing her head into a nod. "Our little secret," she agrees, glancing quickly back at the pool, before looking away with a shiver of awe and unease. "Our little discovery..."


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Re: Weird Science
« Reply #3 on: January 20, 2008, 08:22:43 PM »
Thank you so much for that pretend. That was crazy fun. Your imagination is amazing, and I had a really really great time. Some of your images are just lovely and vivid, Endy, such as the teeth against the blood - and it really helps create an immersive experience.
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Re: Weird Science
« Reply #4 on: January 21, 2008, 12:21:07 PM »
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Re: Weird Science
« Reply #5 on: January 21, 2008, 05:17:28 PM »
This is so brilliant it's utterly depressing.

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Re: Weird Science
« Reply #6 on: January 21, 2008, 05:28:18 PM »
Meh, the only "depressing" part are our nerdy Oingo Boingo references (bonus points if you can find them). Sowwy...it's not like we were trying to make anyone feel bad or anything... :( I just had Boingo in my car CD player coming home the other night, "Skin" came on, and I was like ahhhhahaha I must do that...The rest just kinda happened as we went!
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Re: Weird Science
« Reply #7 on: January 22, 2008, 11:48:25 AM »
haha, what's so 'depressing' about Oingo Boingo references?!  Nerdy, yeah, but not sad!

It's funny because I've never heard that song ("Skin") and thought, "Wow, I totally feel like performing vivisection on someone today.", but that's also why I so enjoy playing with you.  You don't impose limits on pretend.  Seems like such a common sense thing, but apparently some people can't truly appreciate the distinction between fact and fantasy and that makes for boring roleplay...  In any case, I hope more people will jump in and start creating and really flesh out (or deflesh as the case may be) their characters.  We need more logs here!

Anyway, this was the most fun I've had in Avalon in ages and after the comedy of errors that was ordination, it was just what I needed.  Thanks, Narissa.  :)




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Re: Weird Science
« Reply #8 on: January 23, 2008, 04:51:54 PM »
It's funny because I've never heard that song ("Skin") and thought, "Wow, I totally feel like performing vivisection on someone today."

Damn, I thought those urges were normal...!
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Re: Weird Science
« Reply #9 on: January 31, 2008, 02:45:06 PM »
I've put off reading this _very_ long story for my lack of time, but I've finally sat down and read the whole thing - start to finish. Absolutely exceptional.

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Re: Weird Science
« Reply #10 on: June 20, 2008, 10:02:00 PM »
That was phenomenal.  I was thoroughly involved in the reading as if I were there looking on.  You two work VERY well together to create some incredibly imaginative storyline.  Were I actually there with you, I certainly would have done my part to help dispose of those organs via ravenous mastication and consumption.  An old Necromancer such as myself could hardly pass up on the tasty treats of a corpse so fresh.